The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart shows the revenue from gold sales in Dubai from January to December
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2002.
Overall
, it fluctuated throughout the year and reached its peak in March,
while
it hit its lowest level in July and September. The chart reveals four main tendencies: a rise in the first
quarter
, a fall in the second
quarter
, a fluctuation in the third
quarter
and
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stability in the fourth
quarter
.
This
figure increased suddenly
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the beginning of the year and reached its highest point in March with about 350
million
DH
.
However
, after that, it plummeted and continued to decline in the next three months,
then
bottomed out in July with less than 150
million
DH
. In August, it rose sharply to over 200
million
DH
but it fell again in September. In October, it climbed to nearly 200
million
DH
.
Finally
, it increased slightly in November and stayed steady in the
last
month of 2002.
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