The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The bar chart represents information about the education level in Australia between males and females in the year 1999.
Overall
,it can be seen that men had the certificate of skilled worker diploma, postgraduate and masters degree more than women.
In contrast
, the highest of undergraduate
diploma
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diplomas
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and bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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were women.
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with,
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