The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
The given bar horizontal chart illustrates the
requirements
after graduating from school in Australia in 1999. The measured use count of genders in Australia.
In general, the highest Use synonyms
qualifications
for graduated students had the majority of Use synonyms
requirements
for male students. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the lowest Linking Words
qualifications
were skilled vocational diplomas for women.
Regarding the three highest Use synonyms
qualifications
for males, the highest Use synonyms
value
was a skilled vocational Use synonyms
diploma
, where the Use synonyms
value
was count of 90. Followed by Postgraduate Use synonyms
Diploma
Use synonyms
requirements
had 70 per cent. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the third highest Linking Words
value
was a count of 60 by master's degree.
In terms of Use synonyms
the
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women's
women
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women,
qualifications
had lower than men's. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the proportion of the Linking Words
qualifications
for women had the highest Use synonyms
value
in the Undergraduate Use synonyms
Diploma
, where the number in 70 per cent. Use synonyms
Moreover
, It was clear that the lowest Linking Words
value
had a skilled vocational Use synonyms
diploma
, which had Use synonyms
acount
of 10. Correct your spelling
a count
account
Therefore
, the Linking Words
qualifications
for the Use synonyms
male
had more Fix the agreement mistake
males
requirements
than the females in Australia by 1999.Use synonyms
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