Thw chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summeruse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.

Thw chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 

summeruse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.
The chart illustrates the footfall distributions of fast food restaurants in the US between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it is evident that most individuals visited there once a week or a month,
while
the two extremes of the frequency spectrum made up the
least
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lowest
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percentages: daily
visitors
and
never goers
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. In 2003, around 31% of Americans ate out at fast food chains once a week, followed by 30% who visited less than three times per month. The discrepancy between the two groups widened in 2006;
while
once-weekly
visitors
rose slightly to nearly 33%, monthly
visitors
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reduced
to 25%.
However
, in 2013, the figure for the 'once or twice a month' group escalated dramatically to 33%,
paralled
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paralleled
parallel
with a decrease in weekly
visitors
to 28%. Shifting our focus to the two groups with the smallest figures, less than 5 % of Americans conducted a daily visit to fast food chains or had never been there throughout the period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food restaurant
  • Frequency
  • Consumption
  • Decadal change
  • Trend analysis
  • Peak years
  • Demographics
  • Eating out
  • Health trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Food industry
  • Demographic segmentation
  • Cuisine
  • Independent outlets
  • Chain restaurants
  • Longitudinal study
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