The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the US state of Oregon.

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the US state of Oregon.
The graph displays the
population
incease
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decrease
in the state of Oregon between three different cities. The
number of
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population
in Oregon state was constantly in the progress of
increasment
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increase
over the
20s
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20th
century. Washington made
a
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significent
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significant
progress between the years of 1940 to 1970 with the growth of over 50000
population
while
the Columbia and Yamhillboth grew steadily and close with a difference of 5000
population
. From the beginning of
1970
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Washington made a dramatic rise from 120000 to 240000
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,
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Columbia and Yamhill continued growing steadily each doubling their
population
Yamhill from 45000 to 90000 and Columbia from 30000 to 60000
overally
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overall
each of them making
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progress by gaining 2,3 times of their starting point.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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