The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
This
map illustrates the changes that have taken place in a
town
called Stromer between 1995 and now.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there has been significant development in the
town
, with a large increase in the number of roads and buildings. In 1995, the land around the
town
of Stromer was made up of large areas of
forest
in the north and a substantial portion of farmland in the
south-east
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. There was only one main road which ran through the centre of the
town
with a small commercial area and residential blocks to the north-west and south-east of the shops.
In contrast
, the current map of Stromer includes significantly more buildings, including shops, houses, apartments, a school and an airport. The area of farmland that can be seen in 1995 has shrunk considerably and the amount of
forest
land is
also
much smaller. An airport has been constructed in the northeast, where there was once
forest
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a forest
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in 1995, and in the centre of the
town
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town,
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a school has been built. Around the school, a number of new shops have been established in areas which used to have
forest
or farmland and, in the north and south, new apartment buildings have appeared.
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