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The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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This
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 map illustrates the changes that have taken place in a
town
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 called Stromer between 1995 and now.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 there has been significant development in the
town
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, with a large increase in the number of roads and buildings. In 1995, the land around the
town
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 of Stromer was made up of large areas of
forest
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 in the north and a substantial portion of farmland in the
south-east
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southeast
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. There was only one main road which ran through the centre of the
town
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 with a small commercial area and residential blocks to the north-west and south-east of the shops.
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, the current map of Stromer includes significantly more buildings, including shops, houses, apartments, a school and an airport. The area of farmland that can be seen in 1995 has shrunk considerably and the amount of
forest
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 land is
also
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 much smaller. An airport has been constructed in the northeast, where there was once
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forest
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a forest
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 in 1995, and in the centre of the
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town
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town,
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 a school has been built. Around the school, a number of new shops have been established in areas which used to have
forest
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 or farmland and, in the north and south, new apartment buildings have appeared.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, forest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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