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of

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consuming fast food in 2015.

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consumption

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getting lower time by time as they

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. People

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around 18-34

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daily

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consumption,

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reached 17% followed by

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with 16%. When

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aged 35-49 the

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dropped

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around 9-10%. Age group 50-64 shows

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with roughly 8-9%,

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. A dramatic drop happened when people getting old

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group 65+, the percentages

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around 3-5% as

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became the lowest

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of daily

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consumption for

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