You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts illustrate the nutritional consistency ratio of
medium baked
Add a hyphen
medium-baked
potatos
and Correct your spelling
potatoes
potato
macaroni
.
Overall
,It is clear that
,
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apply
medium
baked potatos
Correct your spelling
potatoes
potato
is more
healthier than Verb problem
are
macaroni
because of the less
amount of carbohydrates and saturated fat.
Fix the agreement mistake
lower
To begin
with, the carbohydrate consistency of medium
baked potato
is about 35 per cent whereas
the
Correct article usage
apply
macaroni
contains just more than half of the total nutrients(52%).Furthermore
,medium
baked potato
has a better percentage of protein,a quarter of the total while
macaroni
has 11%.
Moreover
,40% encountered glucose,saturated fat and other nutients
in yam.Respectively 15%, 10% and 15%.Correct your spelling
nutrients
However
the glucose consistency of Add a comma
However,
macaroni
is lower than potatos
, about 11% and the other nutrients contain 5% which is one-third of the baked Correct your spelling
potatoes
potato
Change noun form
potato's
other nutrient amount
.Change the wording
another nutrient amount
other nutrient amounts
However
, the nutritional containment of macaroni
is unbalanced due to
the high proportion of saturated fat.Which is about 21% whereas
the medium
baked potato
has less than a
half of it.Correct article usage
apply
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, whereas".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, macaroni, potato with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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