Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better.

As the population of countries grow, the number of elderly and people who are

need

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also

increases.

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, a part of

society

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resourses

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resources

, whether

is

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provided by

families

or governments, should be spent on taking care of these people.

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eastern

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families

,

this

is considered

as

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a family

problem

;

however

,

this

not

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the best

way

for tackling

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the issue. The following essay will

discuses

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discuss

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both systems as well as my personal opinion. In some countries, mostly eastern ones, the

problem

of looking after disabled and old

peoples

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people

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are

families

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duty;

however

,

this

might not be a good idea.

The taking

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care of

relative

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may hurt the other members of a family.

For example

, if someone has an unemployed brother or sister he/she might be forced to pay him/her bills and by doing

this

, the extra unnecessary pressure is on one member and

that is

not simply fair. As

it

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is evident in most eastern

families

, usually one of

children

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the children

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take

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the responsibility

of

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others and most of

family

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the family

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members do almost nothing to help that person in need, whether it is

and

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elderly, unemployed brother or sister or one with

different

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kind of disability. And

this

in

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is

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not simply fair for him/her.

In contrast

, some other countries, mostly

western

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, have a systematic

way

of solving

this

problem

,

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and

tries

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to develop a

system

for solving it. In

this

system

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there have been centres and

a

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unique systems for preventing

peoples

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people

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from

this

burden. Take Germany

for example

, they have a

system

for solving elderly and disabled

citizens

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citizens'

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care

problem

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problems

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, a

system

for unemployed

peoples

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people

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. And

this

way

of solving the

problem

as a society

,

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has

lead

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their young ones to have a lot more comfortable life. In conclusion, the systematic

way

of and, western has more merits to answer

this

problem

as a society not to put it on the shoulders of some individuals.