The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.
The table informs about
variety
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the variety
the
number of Change preposition
of the
children
from women
aged between 40 and 44. There are two
parameters which are year
and the number of Add an article
a year
the year
children
. In 1981 women
with two
children
was
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were
dominated
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dominant
while
women
with three and
more Correct word choice
or
children
was
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were
considering
the same. Meanwhile, five years later Wrong verb form
considered
women
who gave birth to two
children
increased and by 1996 and a decade later, women
with two
children
still dominated.
By 2006, women
preffered
not to have more than four Correct your spelling
preferred
children
but having two
children
was being
the most popular condition Unnecessary verb
apply
by
the time. Change preposition
at
In contrast
, in 1996 there was lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
women
that was having one child
but the percentage of childless women
was bigger at that time. Moreover
, a decade before 1996, the percentage of women
with no child
, one child
, two
childrenc
three Correct your spelling
children
children
and four or more children
was 9.7%, 8.7%, 35.6%, 27%, 18,9
% respectively. Correct word choice
and 18,9
One-fourths
century before 2006, only 8,5% Add an article
A one-fourths
women
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of women
was having
no Wrong verb form
had
child
, and the number of women
with one child
even
smaller.Add a missing verb
was even
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