In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?
The percentage of
plants
and animals is decreasing in most countries. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
as to
why Change preposition
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this
is happening, which is Linking Words
due to
the intervention of us as humans. Linking Words
This
issue could be solved by raising Linking Words
awareness
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as well as
, conservating these critters and Linking Words
plants
.
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To begin
with, one of the reasons as to why Linking Words
plants
and invertebrates are declining is Use synonyms
first,
the deforestation of trees and Linking Words
plants
by the government and its people is still being conducted. Use synonyms
In other words
, if we keep on cutting down trees and Linking Words
plants
, not only would that species fall in number but Use synonyms
also
animals won't have anything to feed on and Linking Words
thus
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dying
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In addition
, it would Linking Words
also
destroy the habitats of many. Linking Words
For example
, if we chop all the shrubs and vegetation, deer and other herbivores that depend on it won't be able to feed on it themselves and their young will die Linking Words
as well as
the particular plant species.
The key to solving Linking Words
this
is that we should raise Linking Words
awareness
around the world and start conservation campaigns for both declining Use synonyms
plants
and animal Use synonyms
genus
. To clarify, increasing Fix the agreement mistake
genera
awareness
would start protests against the government to stop deforestation. Use synonyms
Moreover
, conservation schemes help in protecting the specific type of animal or plant and make them breed and reproduce more of their own kind, so they can rise again. Linking Words
For instance
, it was reported that white rhinos were about to go extinct so they protected the very few left and mated them with one another.
In conclusion, around the world, the figures of animals and Linking Words
plants
are plunging down because of our own actions and lack of Use synonyms
awareness
. Use synonyms
However
, the solution to Linking Words
this
is to educate the people around us and to protect and care for all the vegetation and critters.Linking Words
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