You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my feedback on the short cookery

course

that I

have

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completed from your esteemed school

last

month.

To begin

with, I have enjoyed a lot

this

three-months

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long short

course

on contemporary cookery items. The

overall

facilities

was

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really excellent

such

as spacious and air-conditioned

class room

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classrooms

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,

friendly

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atmosphere, and modern

equipments

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equipment

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are

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helped all the participants very much to gain

the

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knowledge on how to

cooke

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cook

delicious

food

. You will be glad to hear that after completing

this

short

course

, I have started cooking in my house to experience how to cook continental,

chinese

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, and

italian

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food

. Twice

in

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a week, I spend my days

to prepare

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preparing

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different types of

food

, especially

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chicken

burger

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burgers

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and pizza which are very much

favourite

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to

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my family members.

Furthermore

, I would appreciate it if you start another short

course

in your school on how to cook

mexican

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food

. Some of my friends

are

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asked me about

this

course

as they are very much interested

to learn

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in learning

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how to cook

mexican

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food

. I wish all the best for your cookery school. Yours faithfully, Faisal