You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my feedback on the short cookery Linking Words
course
that I Use synonyms
have
completed from your esteemed school Unnecessary verb
apply
last
month.
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To begin
with, I have enjoyed a lot Linking Words
this
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three-months
long short Correct your spelling
three-month
course
on contemporary cookery items. The Use synonyms
overall
facilities Linking Words
was
really excellent Change the verb form
were
such
as spacious and air-conditioned Linking Words
class room
, Correct your spelling
classrooms
friendly
atmosphere, and modern Correct article usage
a friendly
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
are
helped all the participants very much to gain Unnecessary verb
apply
the
knowledge on how to Correct article usage
apply
cooke
delicious Correct your spelling
cook
food
.
You will be glad to hear that after completing Use synonyms
this
short Linking Words
course
, I have started cooking in my house to experience how to cook continental, Use synonyms
chinese
, and Change the capitalization
Chinese
italian
Change the capitalization
Italian
food
. Twice Use synonyms
in
a week, I spend my days Change preposition
apply
to prepare
different types of Change the verb form
preparing
food
, especially Use synonyms
the
chicken Correct article usage
apply
burger
and pizza which are very much Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
favourite
Fix the agreement mistake
favourites
to
my family members.
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for
Furthermore
, I would appreciate it if you start another short Linking Words
course
in your school on how to cook Use synonyms
mexican
Change the capitalization
Mexican
food
. Some of my friends Use synonyms
are
asked me about Verb problem
have
this
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course
as they are very much interested Use synonyms
to learn
how to cook Change preposition
in learning
mexican
Change the capitalization
Mexican
food
.
I wish all the best for your cookery school.
Yours faithfully,
FaisalUse synonyms
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Greeting and Closing
Ensure the letter has a clear opening and closing, maintaining the appropriate formal tone throughout.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Group related information together and keep one idea to each paragraph to enhance readability.
Suitable Writing Tone
A more formal tone matching a letter to an authority should be consistently applied, avoiding informal language when addressing the course director.
Complete Response
Make sure to fully address all three bullet points of the task with sufficient detail, combined with your personal experiences or suggestions.
Logical Structure
The letter should flow logically from one point to the next, using appropriate transition words and phrases to improve coherence.