a child's character is greatly influenced by the in which adults around them behave.Do you agree with this? What other factors influence a child's character?

No one can deny that a child's character can be influenced by people around them.
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on whether other factors
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a youngster's character. In
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and provide my reasons .
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parents
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big role models to their kids.
As a result
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in various
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such
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home and school can
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have
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impact on their
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.
For example
, children learn by
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mimicking
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grown-ups
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and
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to repeat what they heard and saw,
for instance
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sometimes
parents
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mistakes they are making, not knowing how these have
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huge consequences on the development of a child's personality and
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.
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believe having
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good role models help offsprings to come into being
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well-rounded person. The other reasons why
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believe exposure to media
such
as television,
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, and gaming
also
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a child's behaviors.In other
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, most
parents
are busy
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their working schedules, they can often neglect their kids
due to
tiredness.
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, kids more often
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scrolling
through various social sites or gaming rather than having
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quality time with their
parents
.
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development as the use of
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more than required.
Lastly
, long screen hours result in weak
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eyesight
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to eye problems. In conclusion,
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strongly believe not only grown person can affect
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offspring
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their mentality and
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psychology
but
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factors
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of their characteristic.
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