The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrated
industrial
area in the town of Norbition, Correct article usage
the industrial
Correct word choice
and compare
compare
by now and future Wrong verb form
compared
plan
. Fix the agreement mistake
plans
Overall
, there has significantly
change Change the word
significant
of
functions from work to housing.
Change preposition
in
Lookng
more Correct your spelling
Looking
closed
Replace the word
closely
in
Change preposition
at
this
figure, we can see that the perpose
of all Correct your spelling
purpose
Correct article usage
the bulidings
bulidings
are factory Correct your spelling
building
in
now, located Change preposition
apply
nearby
the Change preposition
near
sidewalk
in Fix the agreement mistake
sidewalks
east
and south. Whereare western and north are not any development, river and farmland Correct article usage
the east
had
keep complete space.
After the development, there has Add the particle
had to
notionably
change that the buildings for industrial purpose in.the Correct your spelling
notably
notionally
bigenning
will transform to housing or public Correct your spelling
beginning
fucilites
. Correct your spelling
facilities
facility
For example
, there are such
like school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
playground
and medical Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
centre
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centres
in
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on
east
side of the map. Add an article
the east
Moreover
, stores also
replace
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replaced
the
Remove the article
apply
some
Correct quantifier usage
apply
orginel
place Correct your spelling
original
in
Change preposition
on
western-south
side, sidewalk has little change too. In Add an article
the western-south
term
Fix the agreement mistake
terms
to
Change preposition
of
western
and north Add an article
the western
side
, will have more developments that Fix the agreement mistake
sides
sidewalk
and Fix the agreement mistake
sidewalks
house
, Fix the agreement mistake
houses
strenghen
to verge of the town, Correct your spelling
strengthen
even
cross the river to farmland.Correct word choice
and even
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