The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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industrial

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the industrial

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area in the town of Norbition,

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and compare

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compare

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compared

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by now and future

plan

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plans

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.

Overall

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, there has

significantly

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significant

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change

of

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in

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functions from work to housing.

Lookng

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Looking

more

closed

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closely

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in

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at

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this

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figure, we can see that the

perpose

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purpose

of all

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the bulidings

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bulidings

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building

are factory

in

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apply

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now, located

nearby

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near

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the

sidewalk

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sidewalks

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in

east

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the east

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and south. Whereare western and north are not any development, river and farmland

had

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had to

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keep complete space. After the development, there has

notionably

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notably

notionally

change that the buildings for industrial purpose in.the

bigenning

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beginning

will transform to housing or public

fucilites

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facilities

facility

.

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, there are

such

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like

school

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schools

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,

playground

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playgrounds

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and medical

centre

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centres

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in

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on

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east

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the east

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side of the map.

Moreover

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, stores

also

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replace

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replaced

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the

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apply

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some

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apply

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orginel

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original

place

in

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on

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western-south

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the western-south

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side, sidewalk has little change too. In

term

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terms

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to

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of

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western

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the western

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and north

side

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sides

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, will have more developments that

sidewalk

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sidewalks

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and

house

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houses

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,

strenghen

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strengthen

to verge of the town,

even

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and even

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cross the river to farmland.