The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of urban living in four Asian nations and the predictions that will occur over two decades
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between 1970 and 2040.
Overall
, all categories show an upward trend throughout the given
period
and show a gradual increase for each county. The highest population at the start was the Philippines
while
the least was Indonesia.
Moreover
, Malaysia surpassed all the categories and became the highest in the
last
period
and Thailand was the least.
To begin
with, the Philippines and Thailand share almost the same point at the beginning of the
period
, it was about 30%. The former shows a fluctuation trend and reached above 60% In 2040,
whereas
the latter saw a gradual rise from 1970 to 1990 and increased dramatically through the remaining
period
. In terms of the two remaining countries, Thailand stood at below 20% and witnessed a gradual increase of 30% to exactly 50% in the
last
period
and it
also
became the least urban population of the following nations.
Similarly
, Indonesia started at the least in the first year at approximately 15%,
then
it had a
considerably increased
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at around 60% in 2040.
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