Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some say that

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the extinction

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of some

animals

and

plants

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species is the main environmental issue,

while

others argue that there are other more urgent environmental complications.

This

essay will argue that

although

the disappearance of

animals

and

plants

can

cause

chaos in

the

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apply

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biodiversity and life danger,

pollution

and climate change are major

problems

. On the one hand, animal extinction can lead to

issues

in other

animals

' life

process

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processes

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.

This

is because all

animals

have their own way of surviving, hunting, reproducing and feeding.

Then

, the disappearance of an animal

,

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will

cause

alteration,

such

as

excessive

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an excessive

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amount of the food that these

animals

ate,

while

those

animals

which feed on these "

extincted

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extinct

animals

" will die of hunger.

Furthermore

,

plants

are essential for humans' lives. The reason

of

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for

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this

is that they provide oxygen, which people and other living things

needs

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need

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for surviving

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to survive

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.

For example

,

according to

scientists around 300 to 500

plants

are needed to provide oxygen to one person,

then

if the number of

plants

are

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is

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reduced, there might not be sufficient oxygen for everyone.

However

, I believe that

solving

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by solving

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more urgent environmental

problems

, these

issues

will be solved too.

On the other hand

, global warming and

pollution

leads

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lead

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to

destruction

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the destruction

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of ecosystems.

This

is because changing climatic conditions

as well as

the increasing amount of carbon dioxide caused by contamination

,

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will

cause

scarcity in

fresh water

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freshwater

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sources, food, energy resources and fuel, which all

this

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apply

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can cost humans' lives.

Also

,

this

issues

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issue

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leads to air

pollution

, in which air

queality

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quality

is reduced, and

this

causes diseases related to the respiratory system,

such

as asthma or lung cancer. Recent research concluded that during the

last

4 years, asthma cases in

high

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highly

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polluted countries, increased by approximately 31%. In my opinion, solving these complications is the key

for solve

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to solving

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all environmental

problems

. In conclusion,

although

extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

and

plants

can

cause

issues

to other living things and put people's lives in danger, by solving global warming and

pollution

,

problems

related to the environment will

be solve

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be solved

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, and I,

therefore

, believe that

this

point of view is more important.