Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some say that

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the extinction

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of some

animals

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and

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plants

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plant

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species is the main environmental issue,

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others argue that there are other more urgent environmental complications.

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essay will argue that

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the disappearance of

animals

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and

plants

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can

cause

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chaos in

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apply

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biodiversity and life danger,

pollution

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and climate change are major

problems

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. On the one hand, animal extinction can lead to

issues

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in other

animals

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' life

process

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processes

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.

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is because all

animals

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have their own way of surviving, hunting, reproducing and feeding.

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, the disappearance of an animal

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will

cause

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alteration,

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as

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an excessive

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amount of the food that these

animals

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ate,

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those

animals

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which feed on these "

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extinct

animals

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" will die of hunger.

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,

plants

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are essential for humans' lives. The reason

of

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for

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is that they provide oxygen, which people and other living things

needs

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for surviving

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to survive

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.

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,

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scientists around 300 to 500

plants

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are needed to provide oxygen to one person,

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if the number of

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are

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reduced, there might not be sufficient oxygen for everyone.

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, I believe that

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more urgent environmental

problems

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, these

issues

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will be solved too.

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, global warming and

pollution

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leads

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lead

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to

destruction

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the destruction

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of ecosystems.

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is because changing climatic conditions

as well as

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the increasing amount of carbon dioxide caused by contamination

,

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apply

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will

cause

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scarcity in

fresh water

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freshwater

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sources, food, energy resources and fuel, which all

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this

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can cost humans' lives.

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,

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issues

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issue

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leads to air

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, in which air

queality

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quality

is reduced, and

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causes diseases related to the respiratory system,

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as asthma or lung cancer. Recent research concluded that during the

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4 years, asthma cases in

high

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polluted countries, increased by approximately 31%. In my opinion, solving these complications is the key

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to solving

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all environmental

problems

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. In conclusion,

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extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

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and

plants

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can

cause

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issues

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to other living things and put people's lives in danger, by solving global warming and

pollution

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,

problems

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related to the environment will

be solve

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be solved

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, and I,

therefore

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, believe that

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point of view is more important.