Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?
Many countries across the globe are facing the same problem of the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity which is caused by human activities.
This
essay will discuss the causes of this
and try to provide possible solutions to tackle this
problem.
The primary cause of this
issue is the number of deforestation in some countries which have large forest areas or well
known as“the lung of the world”. One of the main reasons why Add a missing verb
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people
try to take benefits from deforestation is to take the woods illegally which is considered as
illegal logging. Change preposition
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For instance
, Borneo is one of the big islands in Indonesia with many cases of illegal logging. The industry stole the woods from the forest which destroyed the ecosystem of biodiversity. Due to
the devastation of natural habitats, some animal species attacked residents in the village and stole their food. The industries in most cases did not conduct reforestation as part of their responsibility.
The only solution for
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this
problem is to impose a strict law for
whoever does the deforestation. The Government should restrict the permit of land usage for a lot of wood companies. Change preposition
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This
solution also
needs support from local people
and jungle police to monitor illegal logging activities in their area and immediately make a report to the government. The advancement of social media also
can be an advantage, people
can post illegal activities on their account
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this
topic. For further
solutions, people
should replanting
trees to provide better natural resources to preserve biological diversity.
In conclusion, the reason behind the rise of biodiversity and species extinction is the illegal logging in woodland and the possible solutions are law enforcement by permit restriction and reforestation.Change the verb form
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