The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
The graph illustrates the percentage of money spent on health care services in three European steady
countries
and two non European
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non-European
countries
over the year 2002.
Overall
, the chart demonstrates that the total spending and public spending had simultaneously increased for all the countries
. However
in private spending, it is shown to be low for all Add a comma
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countries
except for USA
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The graph Correct article usage
the USA
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shows
increase
across all the countries
from 8% to14%. There seems
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seems to
increase
of 2-4% in public spending as well, the highest being 14% and the lowest around 4.8%. Furthermore
, private spending had an abrupt increase
for all countries
- Japan, Italy, France, German
, USA.
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Germany
Lastly
, there is a trend oberved
between total spending and public spending. Starting withCorrect your spelling
observed
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a
increase
and then
plateau , and then
starkly increase
a significant percentage. The
similar trend is seen in public speaking as well.Correct article usage
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