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The maps elow show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data

The maps elow show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data
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The given
map
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 shows that the
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countryside
countrysude
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country
was
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is
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at
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in
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north
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the north
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,there is a main
road
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 which is in the
centre
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 and both sides of
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road
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the road
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having
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have
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 shops the
map
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 includes
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park
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a park
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 on the
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other
oher
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other
 side it has
school
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a school
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 between the school and
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park
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the park
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 there
was
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is
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 a housing area
First
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The first
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map
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 shows that the
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islip
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Islip
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town
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centre
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now
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is now
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 and the other
map
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 shows that the
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islip
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Islip
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town
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centre
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planned
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is planned
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 for
development
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 .
this
Linking Words
 planned
development
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mmap
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map
 looks like proper divisions of all the elements in the
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islip
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Islip
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town
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centre
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 . comparing with
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islip
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Islip Centre
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centre
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 now and a planned
development
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 . the few housing areas and
school
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schools
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are remain
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remain
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 in the same place The planned
development
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 contains
a
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the
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 main features of
dual
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a dual
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carrigeway
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carriageway
carriageways
. The main
road
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 will be turned into
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a pedastrian
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pedastrian
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pedestrian
 only
road
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 . The shops towards
south
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the south
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remains
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remain
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 the same place , The size of the
park
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 is reduced when compared to the
town
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centre
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 now, there are new housing area to the left of
pedastrians
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the pedastrians
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only
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apply
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road
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 and behind the
park
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 . The main
road
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 goes
along with
Linking Words
 Bus station,shopping
centre
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 and car
park
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, road, centre, park, islip, town, development with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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