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The maps elow show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data

The maps elow show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data
#maps #elow #show #centre #town #islip #plan #development #information #features #comparisons #data
The given
map
 shows that the
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countryside
countrysude
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country
was
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is
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at
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in
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north
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the north
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,there is a main
road
 which is in the
centre
 and both sides of
road
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the road
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having
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have
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 shops the
map
 includes
park
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a park
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 on the
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other
oher
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other
 side it has
school
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a school
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 between the school and
park
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the park
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 there
was
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is
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 a housing area
First
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The first
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map
 shows that the
islip
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Islip
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town
centre
now
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is now
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 and the other
map
 shows that the
islip
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Islip
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town
centre
planned
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is planned
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 for
development
 .
this
 planned
development
mmap
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map
 looks like proper divisions of all the elements in the
islip
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Islip
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town
centre
 . comparing with
islip
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Islip Centre
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centre
 now and a planned
development
 . the few housing areas and
school
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schools
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are remain
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remain
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 in the same place The planned
development
 contains
a
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the
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 main features of
dual
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a dual
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carrigeway
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carriageway
carriageways
. The main
road
 will be turned into
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a pedastrian
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pedastrian
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pedestrian
 only
road
 . The shops towards
south
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the south
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remains
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remain
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 the same place , The size of the
park
 is reduced when compared to the
town
centre
 now, there are new housing area to the left of
pedastrians
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the pedastrians
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only
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apply
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road
 and behind the
park
 . The main
road
 goes
along with
 Bus station,shopping
centre
 and car
park
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, road, centre, park, islip, town, development with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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