It is true that
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this
is the era of modern
technology
when the whole globe is in the grab of our hand. Some individuals hold the opinion that
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our
culture, way of living,
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the way of reading habit will be changed by the effect of
technology
, I agree with
this
concept that online reading like;
Ebook
,
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copyFix the agreement mistake
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,
audioCorrect word choice
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novelFix the agreement mistake
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will totally replenish our traditional
newspaper
and
magazines
.
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, people's
life becameWrong verb form
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so hectic that they
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not enough time to go library or buy
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. People
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to reach
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easiest way of leading life. Here, one can find
thousandsAdd the preposition
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blessings of
technology
. Even, in aspects of reading
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,
newspaperFix the agreement mistake
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or anything else. The online
news
became available just after the incident
whereas
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magazineFix the agreement mistake
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or other
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areWrong verb form
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available only day after morning. So, one
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to wait till the next morning if anyone wants to go through only with the existing source of reading.
MaximumChange the article
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number of people use the smart or
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phone
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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makeChange the verb form
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the reading culture more easy,
availableCorrect quantifier usage
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and less
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. Even one who is in
travellingCorrect article usage
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mood
he Correct pronoun usage
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can
also
have the
to read online
newspaperFix the agreement mistake
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,
pdfCorrect your spelling
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magazines
or audio-visual
advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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as all
contentsCorrect article usage
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are available
inChange preposition
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different kinds of online
platformFix the agreement mistake
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like; facebook, online
news
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,
and many other different
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.
On the other hand
, several arguments can be traced that are opposed to the given statement.
Firstly
,
now, a significant number of readers love to read
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news
or
magazines
. Sometimes, online
news
coverCorrect subject-verb agreement
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only the headings but not the details
news
which
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many readers discourage to
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Ebook
.
Secondly
, many men believe that by avoiding the traditional culture of reading, men became robotic without empathy or sympathy that can only be improved into a human by reading
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. That's why, still now they don't change their reading habit
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the technological
system
.
Moreover
, the great man in the world became famous by reading their
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system
.
This
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perfectly
exemplifiedWrong verb form
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that, both
system
has
itsCorrect pronoun usage
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own distinct value.
To sum up
, it can be said that, in the era of fierce competition, we can not ignore the
system
which will drop
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in Change preposition
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behind. So,
Ebook
,
pdfCorrect your spelling
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documents or audio
systemFix the agreement mistake
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ofChange preposition
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reading will be a
blessingsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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but not totally avoid the
or
magazines
.