The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant
The graphs compare
Japanese
and American typical offices.
Overall
, the typical
office
of
Japanese
and American are dramatically different, with the former focusing on the interaction between people and the latter encouraging employees independent work. In the
Japanese
office
, the chairs were arranged into two large areas. Specifically, each area comprises two opposite rows, with the tables distanced in order for to people discuss easily. Controller sections and the grader manager department were placed at the top of each row and the top of the
office
respectively to ensure that administrators could observe team members. Meanwhile, the space workers were divided into separate chambers in the centre with walls to avoid disruption.
Similarly
, manager areas were
also
organized into individual apartments. There are two windows opposite the administrative areas in the American
office
.
While
the
Japanese
office
has only windows after the manager department.
This
office
also
placed a chair outside the
office
for the waiter.
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