The graph below shows that the percentages of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows that the percentages of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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The chart below illustrates the export proportion of Australia to four countries over the
period
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from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
exports
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to Japan and the US drown down during the
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from 1990 to 2012.
However
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,
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to China and India grew over
this
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period
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. By the end of the
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, Chinese
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had become most common, followed by Japanese, American, and
finally
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Indian ones. In 1990 Japan was the country that witnessed the most Australian
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at nearly 25%. Since
then
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, it has gradually decreased to less than 20% in 2012.
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,
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to the US fluctuated at around 10% until 2000. After that, it was sharply declining from more than 10% to nearly 5%, before seeing a slight increase of approximately 2% in 2010.
In contrast
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, since 1990
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to China have seen a gradual increase, reaching their peak in 2012 at nearly 30%. India remained unchanged at nearly 1% up until 2000, and in the following years until
2010
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2010,
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it witnessed a constant increase. After that, it witnessed a slight decrease to about 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, exports with synonyms.
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