You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbours disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter describe how this situation affects you; explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

Dear Sir I hope
letter finds you in a pink of health. Actually, I am getting disturbed by my neighbours every noon and night
due to
the loud music played by them from 3 p.m. onwards till midnight. Well, it is getting hard for me to live at
location because I have to study during the evening time and
I need to get a proper sleep as well, as I have to start my shift at 5 o'clock in the morning at Tim Hortons. Actually, I had already conversed with them twice
month about
situation, but they
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being a good neighbour, I do not have any right to interrupt
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the house matters. Even though, they told me that they are
paying rent so, they can do whatever they want to do.
, I was left with no option and I need to talk to you.
, it is not only I who is facing
trouble but the old couple who is living next to them,
have the same issue. If you can talk to them to help me in
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, I would really appreciate that.
, I am left with no option but to call the cops on them for violating the rules and creating noise pollution overnight. Waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.
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suitable writing tone
Ensure that the tone of the letter is consistently formal as this is a letter to your landlord and must convey respect and politeness throughout.
greeting and closing
Include a clear greeting, such as 'Dear Mr./Mrs. [Last Name],' to add a level of formality and personalization to the correspondence.
complete response
Although you have described the noise issue and its impact, consider expanding on the specific consequences you face, to enhance the completeness of the response.
logical structure
The letter could benefit from improved coherence by separating ideas into clear paragraphs and using connective phrases to link them together naturally.
single idea per paragraph
Keep one idea per paragraph – opening situation, steps taken to resolve, and a call to action – for better readability and organization.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Noise pollution
  • Disturbance
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Quality of life
  • Considerate behaviour
  • Residential quiet hours
  • Sound insulation
  • Mediation
  • Tenancy agreement
  • Follow-up
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