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Band 5.5

You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbours disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter describe how this situation affects you; explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

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Dear Sir I hope
this
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 letter finds you in a pink of health. Actually, I am getting disturbed by my neighbours every noon and night
due to
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 the loud music played by them from 3 p.m. onwards till midnight. Well, it is getting hard for me to live at
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 location because I have to study during the evening time and
then
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 I need to get a proper sleep as well, as I have to start my shift at 5 o'clock in the morning at Tim Hortons. Actually, I had already conversed with them twice
last
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 month about
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 situation, but they
say
Wrong verb form
said that

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb say. Consider changing it.

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 being a good neighbour, I do not have any right to interrupt
in
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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the house matters. Even though, they told me that they are
also
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 paying rent so, they can do whatever they want to do.
Therefore
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I was left with no option and I need to talk to you.
Moreover
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it is not only I who is facing
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 trouble but the old couple who is living next to them,
also
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 have the same issue. If you can talk to them to help me in
this
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
situtation
Correct your spelling
situation

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, I would really appreciate that.
Otherwise
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I am left with no option but to call the cops on them for violating the rules and creating noise pollution overnight. Waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur.

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suitable writing tone
Ensure that the tone of the letter is consistently formal as this is a letter to your landlord and must convey respect and politeness throughout.
greeting and closing
Include a clear greeting, such as 'Dear Mr./Mrs. [Last Name],' to add a level of formality and personalization to the correspondence.
complete response
Although you have described the noise issue and its impact, consider expanding on the specific consequences you face, to enhance the completeness of the response.
logical structure
The letter could benefit from improved coherence by separating ideas into clear paragraphs and using connective phrases to link them together naturally.
single idea per paragraph
Keep one idea per paragraph – opening situation, steps taken to resolve, and a call to action – for better readability and organization.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Noise pollution
  • Disturbance
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Quality of life
  • Considerate behaviour
  • Residential quiet hours
  • Sound insulation
  • Mediation
  • Tenancy agreement
  • Follow-up
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