The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph provides
the
information about different sets of age Correct article usage
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groups
between 1990 and 2020 denoting the population
of Iceland.
Overall
, it is clear from the histogram that older
populace aged 55 to 64 and 65 to above had some minor fluctuations in the following years. The Correct article usage
the older
people
aged between 25 to 54 had a steady growth from 1990 to end
of the period. Correct article usage
the end
However
, young
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the young
population
aged 15 to 24 and 0 to 14, initially
experienced a higher growth but declined continuously for the remaining set of years.
Firstly
, in 1990 the population
of 25-54 approximately had a peak of 30% which is considered to be the combination of forming both the age groups
of 55 to 64 and 65 to over. Moreover
, citizens aged between 15 to 24 and 0 to 14 managed to cross the percentage of above 20%. Furthermore
, in 2000 they displayed a
quite similar results in their rankings but made an improvement in Correct the article-noun agreement
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few
numbers when compared to the Correct article usage
a few
last
decade.
Secondly
, in 2010 the people
aged 25-54 and 65-over were the only groups
who had experienced some inclanation in their population
. However
, the figure made a drastic decrease in other sets of age groups
. Even though, at end
of the Correct article usage
the end
year
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year,
people
aged between 25-54 made a significant rise in their 49% growth but
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people
in other sets of group
continued to decline a lot.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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