The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides
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information about different sets of age
groups
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between 1990 and 2020 denoting the
population
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of Iceland.
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, it is clear from the histogram that
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populace aged 55 to 64 and 65 to above had some minor fluctuations in the following years. The
people
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aged between 25 to 54 had a steady growth from 1990 to
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of the period.
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,
young
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population
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aged 15 to 24 and 0 to 14,
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experienced a higher growth but declined continuously for the remaining set of years.
Firstly
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, in 1990 the
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of 25-54 approximately had a peak of 30% which is considered to be the combination of forming both the age
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of 55 to 64 and 65 to over.
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, citizens aged between 15 to 24 and 0 to 14 managed to cross the percentage of above 20%.
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, in 2000 they displayed
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quite similar results in their rankings but made an improvement in
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numbers when compared to the
last
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decade.
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, in 2010 the
people
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aged 25-54 and 65-over were the only
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who had experienced some inclanation in their
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.
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, the figure made a drastic decrease in other sets of age
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. Even though, at
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of the
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people
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aged between 25-54 made a significant rise in their 49% growth
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people
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in other sets of
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continued to decline a lot.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, population, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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