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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates
tourists
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 coming to the
UK
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 from overseas and
people
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 going to another country from the
UK
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 between 1979 and 1999. The bar chart displays five different countries that visited the
UK
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 in the year 1999.
Overall
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, the number of
UK
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 citizens who travelled abroad was higher than
people
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 who came to the
UK
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.
While
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tourists
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 from France majority visited the
UK
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 when compared to the other four countries.
To begin
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 with, in 1979, individuals who travelled to other nations were nearly 11
million
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.
Then
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this
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 trend had a slight increase until 1985 about 20
million
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. From 1985, it rapidly increased every year and reached nearly 52
million
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people
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 in the year 1999. Citizens of other countries who visited the
UK
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 were 10
million
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 in 1979. A small amount has increased by 1984. After that, only minimal growth can only seen in the graph approximately 20
million
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 in 1989, 22
million
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 in 1999 and
at the end
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 of the period it was about 25
million
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people
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. The number of
people
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 who visited the
UK
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 from France hit the highest point and it was 13
million
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.
Tourists
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 from, Spain was the second largest visited the
UK
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 nearly 9
million
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. As compared to France and Spain, the USA, Greece and Turkey
people
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 were the least amount of
tourists
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 visited the
UK
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 about 2
million
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, 3
million
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, 4
million
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 respectively.
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