The chart below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
The
given
pie chart depicts information about the proportion of participants of organizations in the respective Verb problem
apply
year
of 2008 and 2004. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, the number of environment and sport experienced upward trends while
the figure of art, others and education commenced downward trends.
Getting back to the details, in 2008 the participant
for environment showed about 21 percent at the beginning and it Fix the agreement mistake
participants
start
to Wrong verb form
started
be climbed
significantly in 2014 Wrong verb form
climb
accounted
for almost a third. Wrong verb form
accounting
In addition
, the same proportion showed by the participant
in Fix the agreement mistake
participants
sport
which Fix the agreement mistake
sports
begin
for about less than a fifth and Wrong verb form
began
then
it
went up by 10%. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Subsequently
, the figure of health care participants rose merely
1 percent in 2014.
Change preposition
by merely
On the other hand
, clients for art and others witnessed similar
gap which Correct article usage
a similar
were
merely Change the verb form
was
by
6% in 2014 Change preposition
apply
while
the figure of people who participated in educational
declined by 7%.Replace the word
education
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