The line graph shows the proportion of students aged 18-25 studying in the universities of Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines and Thailand from 1961 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph depicts the percentage of university
students
in the age range of 18-25 in Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines
, and Thailand from 1961 to 2011.
To begin
with, in Malaysia, there is
a gradual and quick increase up until 1971. Wrong verb form
was
However
, beyond that
we can observe a less steeper increase. Add a comma
that,
Furthermore
, Thailand was at an all-time high for the percentage of university students
, until 1967 where
they lost their title of number one to Singapore. Despite that, they gained it back later, when a huge Correct word choice
when
spiked
happened Replace the word
spike
on
1991 and they shot right above Singapore Change preposition
in
on
2011.
Change preposition
in
Lastly
, on the lower end of percentages, Philippines
was struggling to increase their number of Correct article usage
the Philippines
students
right before 1971, in which they experienced a slight rise in students
. Unfortunately, Philippines'
line graph flat-lines around 1991.
To sum it up, the Correct article usage
the Philippines'
overall
trend of university students
is getting higher by the year. Especially in Thailand where the projections seem very promising. Unlike Philippines
whose percentages are unexpected to go up.Correct article usage
the Philippines
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