You recently stayed at your friends's place to look after the house while he/she is away. you accidently damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to your friend. in your lettter you should describe what the accident was explain when it happened. suggest how you damage can be fixed.
Dear Aulia,
How are you? Have you
enjoy
Japan so far?
I want to say something but please don't Change the verb form
enjoyed
mad
at me.
Add a missing verb
be mad
Last
night I was watching Linking Words
netflix
and used your speaker. Do you Change the capitalization
Netflix
remembered
the red JBL Change the form of the verb
remember
on
the Change preposition
in
bed room
? And yes, suddenly I broke it, I do not know why.
Maybe because the volume Correct your spelling
bedroom
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
loud. I'm not sure.
If you are okay with it, I will bring it to Replace the word
too
reparation
store and fix it like before.
I will make sure you do not see any Correct article usage
the reparation
different
. And if the reparation can not fix it, I will buy the new one.
Please enjoy your holiday, I will fix the speaker, I just want to tell you about the situation.
Lots of love,
Andini NatiaReplace the word
difference
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear and logical structure, including complete sentences and coherent paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Use a proper greeting and closing in a formal tone according to the nature of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a single idea per paragraph and clearly develop each paragraph with sufficient detail.
task achievement
Address all the points mentioned in the task prompt accurately and provide a complete response to the question.
task achievement
Adopt a suitable writing tone which is consistent and appropriate for a letter to a friend, balancing politeness and friendliness.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.