The chart below shows the resultsof a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of city residents on three

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way

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ways

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of buying and drinking

coffee

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and tea

accourding

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according

to a survey in five cities in Australia in

last

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4 weeks. In general, most people rather

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go to a café,

while

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the least popular

way

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is to buy fresh

coffee

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Accourding

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to the figure, the highest percentage of

the

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individuals who prefer café is for Melburne and Hubert

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about 63%, and the lowest is for Adelaide

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apply

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less than 50%.

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, buying instant

coffee

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is the

secound

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second

most

refered

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referred

way

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, mostly in Hobart by around 55%, and

leastly

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least

in Sydney by 46%.

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hand

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fewer residents prefer buying fresh

coffee

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for instance

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, in

Brisbane

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Brisbane,

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less than 35% bought fresh

coffee

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. The order of

preferance

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preference

is the same in

four

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the four

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cities, but in

Adelaids

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Adelaide

the most

preferd

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preferred

way

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is buying instant

coffe

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coffee

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50% and going to the café is in

secound

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second

place a

percent

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per cent

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fewer

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less

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city residents prefer to have prepared

coffee

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instead

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of providing it by

theirselves

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themselves

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Vocabulary: Replace the words way, coffee with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Consumption patterns
Predominance
Demographics
External factors
Seasonality
Cultural influences
Health benefits
Caffeine content
Social settings
Expenditure
Survey data
Consumer behavior
Taste preferences

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