Topic: We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Nowadays, almost of human activities use

technology

to ease working, learning, having

vacation

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, and

the

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others. Applying

technology

is equal

with

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to

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the development of

computer

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computers

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, so we can call

this

issue

computer based

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computer-based

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technology

. I imagine that someday all

of

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human

aspect

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aspects

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will be supported by

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computers

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based

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apply

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.

However

,

people

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role

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roles

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must

be exist

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to be guidance. 

Computer

-based technologies are technologies that implement

computer

algorithm

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algorithms

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to make human

works

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work

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is

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apply

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solved easily. We can imagine the period when

human

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humans

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live

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without

computer

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computers

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or

technology

, that time,

people

did their

problem

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effectiveless

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effectiveness

effectively

.

For example

,

people

who

wanted

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to go shopping must

went

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to the shopping outlet directly. So,

people

would

spended

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spend

their time on the way to the outlet. But now, societies can buy clothes that they want in e-commerce or order by social media. In Indonesia,

School

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,

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and University

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University

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implent

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implement

implant

the

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computer

technology

to deliver

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knowledge to their students. In

another place

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other places

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like

private

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the private

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sector or industries, the managers and their staff

held

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hold

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meeting

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meetings

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by

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with

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computer based

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computer-based

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technology

that

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called video conferences. Based on

these sample

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, we get the information that

computer

technology

are

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implented

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implemented

implanted

in several sectors.

However

, the implementation in

government

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sector is not implemented well. There are many services based on

manual

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manually

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such

as

election

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the election

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of president and

admistration

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administration

in villages. But I think in the future the implementation of

computer

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computers

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will

be

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increase and reach all of life aspects.

On the other hand

, using

computer

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computers

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to

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much is not good for our health. So, we need some policies to restrict the

using

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use of

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these technologies.

To sum up

,

computer

technology

is

technology

that

implement

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in almost

of

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all of

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life aspects. I feel that societies will

adapt

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adopt

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computer

technology

in

whole

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aspect. The

technology

must

be guide

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be guided

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by policies to make our

body

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bodies

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healthy.