THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF VOUNTEERS BY ORGANIZATIONS IN 2008 AND 2014
The given pie charts
demonstrates
the transitions of Change the verb form
demonstrate
volunteer
proportion in remaining
association (environment, art, Correct article usage
the remaining
sport
, health
care
, educational
and others) between 2008 and 2014.
Replace the word
education
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that several volunteer
percentages experienced a significant decrease in each organizations
, Change to a singular noun
organization
while
the other group
provide
the best Wrong verb form
provided
transform
from 2008 to 2014. Replace the word
transformation
however
, sport
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sports
organizations
presents
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present
the
wide differences in Correct article usage
apply
volunteer
percent
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per cent
overthrough
the other Correct your spelling
over through
overthrow
group
.
In terms of the volunteers whose entertain
in environmental, Replace the word
entertainment
sport
and Fix the agreement mistake
sports
health
care
organizations
was
experienced a slight Unnecessary verb
apply
rose
in the next year. Correct your spelling
rise
Sport
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Sports
group
total Change noun form
group's
percent
in 2014 increased significantly by 10%, Replace the word
percentage
it
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apply
then
similarly
with environmental and health
care
proportion
which upward slightly from 21 % and 7% to 29% and 8% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
However
, it is clear that
the biggest main changes over the organizations
per volunteer
was sport
organization and the least was Change the noun form
sports
health
care
volunteer
.
Regarding the other percentages of Fix the agreement mistake
volunteers
volunteer
in each association that Fix the agreement mistake
volunteers
provide
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provided
decline
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a decline
total
percentages in two different Change preposition
in total
year
, Change to a plural noun
years
that is Art
, educational and Correct your spelling
the art
other
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another group
other groups
group
that was witnessed a significant decline from 2008 to 2014. Moreover
, art and other organizations
total Change noun form
organizations'
organization's
volunteer
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volunteers
was demonstrates
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demonstrated
the
similar total changes Correct article usage
apply
by
6 Change preposition
of
percent
between 2008 and 2014. Change the spelling
per cent
Besides
, educational
was the main organization was experienced Replace the word
education
a
biggest decrease in the next year from 24% to 7%.Change the article
the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words volunteer, sport, health, care, organizations, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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