The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The given line chart illustrates the percentage of the
population
of a country in terms of age group from 1960 until now and the prediction of 20 Use synonyms
years
till 2040. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the Linking Words
population
of the elderly generation have been increasing Use synonyms
however
, the child group is decreasing. Meanwhile, the trend for young people is nearly constant over the given period.
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To begin
with, in 1960, the Linking Words
population
of an age class of 0-14 was around 30% and had a stable trend until 1990 with a gradual decrease to 20%. Use synonyms
While
for the age group of 65+ Linking Words
years
is completely different and it started at 15% and increased to 20% in 1990. Use synonyms
Moreover
, over the following Linking Words
years
and the forecast, citizens aged 65 and more will have a rise in their Use synonyms
population
and vice versa for child generation from 0 to 14 Use synonyms
years
which is around 45% and 10% in 2040, respectively.
As is shown by the graph, the figure for citizens between 15 to 64 did not see the fluctuation and remained constant over the given period. By approximately 55% in 1960 and a small increase in 1990 to 60%. Use synonyms
Additionally
, in 2020, the community of these groups is nearly 50%.Linking Words
Finally
, over the following 20 Linking Words
years
, it had a small fall in their percentage to 42%.Use synonyms
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