The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The given line chart illustrates the percentage of the
population
of a country in terms of age group from 1960 until now and the prediction of 20 years
till 2040. Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the population
of the elderly generation have been increasing however
, the child group is decreasing. Meanwhile, the trend for young people is nearly constant over the given period.
To begin
with, in 1960, the population
of an age class of 0-14 was around 30% and had a stable trend until 1990 with a gradual decrease to 20%. While
for the age group of 65+ years
is completely different and it started at 15% and increased to 20% in 1990. Moreover
, over the following years
and the forecast, citizens aged 65 and more will have a rise in their population
and vice versa for child generation from 0 to 14 years
which is around 45% and 10% in 2040, respectively.
As is shown by the graph, the figure for citizens between 15 to 64 did not see the fluctuation and remained constant over the given period. By approximately 55% in 1960 and a small increase in 1990 to 60%. Additionally
, in 2020, the community of these groups is nearly 50%.Finally
, over the following 20 years
, it had a small fall in their percentage to 42%.Submitted by sh.sharifpour79 on
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