The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Many houses managed to get heated by

central

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the central

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heating system. If you construct it correctly it will always

works

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correctly.

It's

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mechanism is very simple.

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, cold

water

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gets into the

house

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through

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tubes

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and collects in

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water

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the water

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tank, which fills

storage

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the storage

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tank

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the overflow pipe. At

this

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time storage tank

send

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collected

water

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to the boiler. It's important to choose correctly

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water

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a water

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boiler

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because there is

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2 types of it, gas and oil. The

house

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contructors

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contractors

constructors

set

water

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tubes

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at the beginning of the

constructing

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jobs.

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, they deploy and connect the hot

water

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radiators,

which

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main job is to heat the

house

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. When

boiler

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the boiler

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heated up the

water

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to 100 degrees by Celsium,

electric

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pump

runs

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the

water

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into the

tubes

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. Former hot

water

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from the

last

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heating season

is substitutes

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by the "new" heated

water

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. Radiators, which

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connected to the

tubes

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, get warmer with the temperature of

water

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and start to

heating

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heat

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the

house

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. It is the all steps of how a central heating system in a

house

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works. There are many other mechanisms that can heat up the

house

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, but

this

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way is the most popular.

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3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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