The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The graph illustrates the process

to make

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cement

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and how

to

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cement

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is used for concrete production .

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, there are 5 main stages to make

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and 4 materials to make concrete for construction

purpose

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Firstly

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, to produce

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first

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the limestone and clay are crushed and the produced powder from

this

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is passed through a mixer .After that, the powder is

passing

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via a rotating heater where heat is supplied continuously,

this

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process

made

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makes

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the mixture.

Then

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, the mixture

passed

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on a grinder machine in order to produce

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.

Finally

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, the

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is

packaging

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for

sales

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. The second diagram

present

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how concrete

produced

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is produced

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for housing and industry work . In the first step,

one fifths

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, one

tens

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of water,

quarter

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a quarter

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sand

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and half small stones are mixed in a concrete mixer

togher

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together

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concreate

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concrete

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