The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

The line graph displays how

prices

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of three metals changed

throughout

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from

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January to December

in

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2014. It seems that the

overall

flow of price changes between Copper,

Nickel

and

ZInc

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Zinc

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are comparable. At

first,

Nickel

started

a

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peak of 6% compared with prior to January;

However

, since

then

, it decreased substantially and constantly until June. After all, the price of

Nickel

hit a low of 1%.

In contrast

, Zinc was the cheapest metal at the beginning,

while

the line

goes

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up significantly at the

last

. Copper illustrated stable changes relatively exclusive

June

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in June

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. In June, the metals prices

were

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dropped dramatically except copper;

whereas

all of

percentages

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the percentages

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were rise

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rose

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rapidly again in July. They showed steady prices

during

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from

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July to September.

However

October to December, the lines

were change

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were changed

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variably again.

Nickel

and Zinc shoot up with -2% to 1%, -1 and 1.5% respectively. The metal which is the most changed largely was

Nickel

.