The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services in America between 2001 and 2010.

The graph below shows consumers' average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services in America between 2001 and 2010.
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This
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graph depicts Americans’ yearly spending on cell
phones
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,
national
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and national
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and international
fixed-line
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services over 10 years.
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,
while
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money for cell
phones
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witnessed an upward trend, the opposite could be seen in the national
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fixed-line
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fixed line
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. Standing at 700
dollars
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, the most spending was allocated to local landlines in 2001,
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the least belonged to cell
phones
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with only 200
dollars
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which was less than one-third.
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expenditure experienced a gradual decrease of 300
dollars
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which was 350
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less than the highest, from 2001 to 2010. ….
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, the budget for mobile
phones
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increased
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surpassed the national fixed line at 500
dollars
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in 2006 to reach 750
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, the highest,
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of the observed period. Strikingly, negligible growth was seen in spending on global
fixed-line
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for 3 years
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the figure remained stable at 300
dollars
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, until 2010.
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spending on international
fixed-line
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services was the lowest over a decade.
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