The charts show information about the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar charts display information about the
percentage
of employment
for men
and women
aged from
60-64, in four different countries in the years 1970 and 2000.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the USA
had the highest percentage
of employment
for men
in both years. There is not a significant difference in the employment
rate for men
between Belgium
and Japan
in 1970 and 2000. However
, there is a huge contrast for women
in 2000 between the two countries.
In 1970, the proportion of men
employed in all four countries was not considerable. The highest being 88% in the USA
, following 85% in Indonesia. In addition
, Belgium
has a 79% rate and Japan
has a minimum of 75%. In contrast
, the highest percentage
of employment
for women
was 64% and 63% respectively. Moreover
, the lowest percentage
of women
was in Japan
at 55%
In 2000, men
had the greatest percentage
in the USA
(80%) and Japan
being the least (52%) As well as
Belgium
and Indonesia were at 52% and 71% respectively. In comparison, women
's employment
rate decreased by the year 2000. Japan
and Indonesia had similar figures (48% and 50%) whereas
, the USA
was at 42%. Furthermore
, Belgium
was reported as having the lowest percentage
figure by the year 2000 at 9% for both men
and women
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