The charts show information about the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000

The charts show information about the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar charts display information about the
percentage
of
employment
for
men
and
women
aged
from
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60-64, in four different countries in the years 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the
USA
had the highest
percentage
of
employment
for
men
in both years. There is not a significant difference in the
employment
rate for
men
between
Belgium
and
Japan
in 1970 and 2000.
However
, there is a huge contrast for
women
in 2000 between the two countries. In 1970, the proportion of
men
employed in all four countries was not considerable. The highest being 88% in the
USA
, following 85% in Indonesia.
In addition
,
Belgium
has a 79% rate and
Japan
has a minimum of 75%.
In contrast
, the highest
percentage
of
employment
for
women
was 64% and 63% respectively.
Moreover
, the lowest
percentage
of
women
was in
Japan
at 55% In 2000,
men
had the greatest
percentage
in the
USA
(80%) and
Japan
being the least (52%)
As well as
Belgium
and Indonesia were at 52% and 71% respectively. In comparison,
women
's
employment
rate decreased by the year 2000.
Japan
and Indonesia had similar figures (48% and 50%)
whereas
, the
USA
was at 42%.
Furthermore
,
Belgium
was reported as having the lowest
percentage
figure by the year 2000 at 9% for both
men
and
women
.
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