You recently found out that the local council has decided to demolish a particular building in your area. You disagree with this decision and believe that the building is beneficial for the community. write a letter to the local councilor. I n your letter; Explain what you find valuable about the building. suggest what improvements could be made to the building. describe how retaining the building could benefit the coummunity as a whole.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am

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letter to express my feeling about

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down a historical building in my area and I believe that

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it is very useful for

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society. So I am not happy with your decision.

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Asha Patel and I have been living here since my childhood. I briefly explain the importance of

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structure.

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, it is the

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oldest

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building

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my area which is around 75 years old.

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, it is the memory of our ancestors.

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but not least, all local people are using it

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because there

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no

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other

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where people can sit. To enhance the beauty of

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building we can hire the best architecture and we can renovate

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.

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some

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and instruments we can add. I will explain the pros after retaining the building

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that many visitors will come to visit so businesses of

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community

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improve

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by fees and tax,

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. I have

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notion with other members of our society and they are

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favourable response. Tours faithfully, Asha