The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The given graph illustrates the population of a single country
according to
age group starting in 1960 and including a prognosis to 2040. In general, it is clearly seen that the rate of people who are retired will be increased over the
period
while
predicting an increase in the proportion of 0-14 and 14-64 till 2040.
To begin
with, the percentage of the population which is above 65
years
old accounted for approximately 18
percent
in 1960, it will increase by approximately 27
percent
, and
at the end
of the
period
(2040) it will reach 45
percent
. With regards to the rate of the people who are between 15 and 64
years
old, it comprised about half of the total population, whilst the proportion of the age group
that is
0-14
years
old was about third one.
Although
the percentage of the 15-64 age group showed slight growth, it decreased over the
period
between 1970 and 2020, and it is predicted to dwindle to 45
percent
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. Regarding the rate of the people who are between 0 and 14
years
old, it threefold dwindled between 1960 and 2020,
then
it is estimated to have a slight decrease over the
period
(2020-2040).
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