The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts represent the washing
machine
, refrigator
, and Correct your spelling
refrigerator
vacuum
cleaner change in ownership and how many
time Correct quantifier usage
much
have been
spent in Wrong verb form
was
household
doing Add an article
the household
housework
in a specific country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it is clear that
all of
three electrical products experienced an upward Change preposition
apply
trends
, Correct the article-noun agreement
trend
while
the number of hours
of housework
per week
in household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
decline
over the years.
The Wrong verb form
declined
refrigator
Correct your spelling
refrigerator
start
Wrong verb form
started
on
the lowest point apart from the other two, which is no one individuals Change preposition
at
have
that thing in 1920, Wrong verb form
had
whereas
at
the same year, two-fifths of Change preposition
in
household
used Fix the agreement mistake
households
Add an article
the machine
a machine
machine
to wash clothes and nearly a third of Fix the agreement mistake
machines
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
used
Change the form of the verb
use
of
Change preposition
apply
vacuum
Add an article
the vacuum
a vacuum
cleaner
. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Additionally
, the washing machine
, refrigator
, and Correct your spelling
refrigerator
vacuum
cleaner almost met at
the same ratio in 1940 with 60%, just over a half, and 50%, respectively. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, although
the
zero of Correct article usage
apply
household
have Fix the agreement mistake
households
box
for freezing, Add an article
a box
the box
the
ownership surged tremendously over the years and reached its peak at 100% of Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of households in 2019, aligned with the Add an article
the percentage
vacuum
cleaner that also
climbed significantly. However
, where washing
Add an article
the washing
machine
was a
highest ownership before, it was have fluctuated condition before Change the article
the
increased
moderately at around 73%.
Turning to Wrong verb form
increasing
of
the time Change preposition
apply
have been
spent Verb problem
apply
of
Change preposition
on
housework
, which accounted for 50 hours
per week
; however
the chart Add a comma
however,
fall
drastically to 20 Wrong verb form
fell
hours
in 1960. Moreover
, there was climb
slightly in 2000 at around 16 Correct article usage
a climb
hours
per week
, then
diminished nineteenth years later at 10 hours
of housework
per week
per household
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