The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie chart
illustrate
how much Change the verb form
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on
the Change preposition
apply
ploice
budget Correct your spelling
police
from
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is from
different
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a different
source
, and how the money was spent between 2017 and 2018 in Fix the agreement mistake
sources
Britan
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Britain
respectly
. Correct your spelling
respectively
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Generally
specking
, the budgets Correct your spelling
speaking
was
got higher in those two years, and Unnecessary verb
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spent
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the spending
percentage
of technology Add an article
the percentage
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was
rose too.
Looking more closely at the table chart, we can see that the largest budget is from Unnecessary verb
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national
government Add an article
the national
of
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million
in 2017, then
higher
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apply
million
in next
year. Correct article usage
the next
Whereas
the source of local taxes had dramaticly
changed from 91.2 Correct your spelling
dramatically
million
to 102.3 million
in those two years, however
the other sources only higher 0.5 million
at that time, so there are 13.9 million
higher then
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than
last
year.
In terms to
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of
pie
chart, the percentage of salaries had Add an article
the pie
a pie
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a significant
significant
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significantly
lager
in those two yearsCorrect your spelling
larger
,
but slightly decreased from 75% to 69%. Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, the percentage of technology had
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was
rose
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rising
the
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and the
percantage
of buildings and transport was steady Correct your spelling
percentage
no
changes.Change preposition
with no
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