The pie charts below show units of eletricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the distribution of production of electric energy by 5 types of
source
used in France and Australia Fix the agreement mistake
sources
such
as Coal , Oil , Natural Gas , Hydropower and Nuclear power in
two different times Change preposition
at
of
the period 1980 and 2000.
Change preposition
in
To begin
with , Australia where total units of production increased by 70 . In contrast
, Correct article usage
the manufactured
manufactured
of oil and natural gas decreased tenfold and Replace the word
manufacturing
was
equal Correct subject-verb agreement
were
with
each other . Meanwhile, the quantity of Hydropower Change preposition
to
rosed
from 20 to 36 . Correct your spelling
rose
Also
, promotion observed in coal manufacturing began with 50 unity and culminated 130
.
Change preposition
in 130
Secondly
, it was obvious that units of total manufacture doubled in 20 years . The significant increasing
observed in nuclear manufacturing from 15 to 126 . Replace the word
increase
Likewise
, the unity of making oil climbed by 5 . Opposite , in 2000 in France natural gas and hydro power manufactured
less by Add a missing verb
were manufactured
comparising
in 1980 . Correct your spelling
comparison
In addition
, unity
of manufacturing of coal Correct article usage
the unity
remain
the same ( 25 ) .
Looking from the Change the verb form
remains
overall
perspective , the total production of fuel sources expanded the both of country .Submitted by abdurahimov03 on
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