The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
men
and women
in six age
groups
who engaged in regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that the women
's share surpassed the men
's in all age
brackets except for 15-to-24-year-olds. In addition
, the percentages of the eldest group saw the fewest disparity between men
and women
.
In female groups
, women
aged 45 to 54 reported the highest figure; 53.3% exercised regularly, followed by the 55-64 and 35-44 age
brackets, with 53% and 52.5%, respectively. In contrast
, less than a half of women
in the other age
groups
worked out steadily, especially those 65 or older, who ranked at the bottom with only 47.1%.
Shifting our focus to the male groups
, the two extremes of the age
spectrum ranked highest, with 52.8% of the 15-24 age
bracket and 46.7% of those 65 or beyond. Conversely
, the share of 35-to-44-year-old men
marked only 39.5%, the least among all the age
groups
irrespective of gender.Submitted by doable on
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