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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
men
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 and
women
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 in six
age
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groups
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 who engaged in regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
women
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's share surpassed the
men
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's in all
age
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 brackets except for 15-to-24-year-olds.
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, the percentages of the eldest group saw the fewest disparity between
men
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 and
women
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. In female
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,
women
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 aged 45 to 54 reported the highest figure; 53.3% exercised regularly, followed by the 55-64 and 35-44
age
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 brackets, with 53% and 52.5%, respectively.
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, less than a half of
women
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 in the other
age
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groups
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 worked out steadily, especially those 65 or older, who ranked at the bottom with only 47.1%. Shifting our focus to the male
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, the two extremes of the
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 spectrum ranked highest, with 52.8% of the 15-24
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 bracket and 46.7% of those 65 or beyond.
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, the share of 35-to-44-year-old
men
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 marked only 39.5%, the least among all the
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groups
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 irrespective of gender.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, age, groups with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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