The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
men
and Use synonyms
women
in six Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
who engaged in regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.
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Overall
, it is evident that the Linking Words
women
's share surpassed the Use synonyms
men
's in all Use synonyms
age
brackets except for 15-to-24-year-olds. Use synonyms
In addition
, the percentages of the eldest group saw the fewest disparity between Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
.
In female Use synonyms
groups
, Use synonyms
women
aged 45 to 54 reported the highest figure; 53.3% exercised regularly, followed by the 55-64 and 35-44 Use synonyms
age
brackets, with 53% and 52.5%, respectively. Use synonyms
In contrast
, less than a half of Linking Words
women
in the other Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
worked out steadily, especially those 65 or older, who ranked at the bottom with only 47.1%.
Shifting our focus to the male Use synonyms
groups
, the two extremes of the Use synonyms
age
spectrum ranked highest, with 52.8% of the 15-24 Use synonyms
age
bracket and 46.7% of those 65 or beyond. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the share of 35-to-44-year-old Linking Words
men
marked only 39.5%, the least among all the Use synonyms
age
Use synonyms
groups
irrespective of gender.Use synonyms
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