The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and table compare the distribution in
transport
use,
and illustrate the percentage of different reasons for using cars in Edmonton.
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Overall
, as can be seen from the pie chart, car
was the most common mode of transport
among all sectors. In addition
, it is clear from the table that the most dominant purposes for car
use were related to work.
In terms of transport
distribution, while
commuting by car
accounted for the highest percentage, with 45%, their taxi counterpart made up only 10%. Bus, along with
taxi, was the least common means of transport
, taking up merely 10%. Meanwhile, the figure for the other public transport
, LRT, was significantly higher than that of bus, standing at 35%.
With regard to the reasons for using the car
, the figures for shopping and leisure activities were the lowest, consisting of only 15%. By contrast
, 40% of car
users had the purpose of taking children to school, compared with 45% of the business sector. Finally
, the use of cars for commuting to work accounted for the highest percentage, with 55%.Submitted by phanhuyhoang278 on
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