The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the epicentre of a small rural area called Islip as the present structure and its plans for the ongoing thrives.
In general, it is clearly seen that the new plan consists of large roads, which encompass the town centre throughout, against possible traffic congestion problems that can be called modernization attempts.
The main road, which is located in the middle of the town centre, is planned to be demolished by giving its place to pedestrians
while
having dramatic changes to northern shops which are replaced by several facilities. In addition
, the park has been decided to be renovated by changing its size to a small one for the future.
On the other hand
, 2 new accommodations will be built as the population is increasing. Shops that are located in the south of the town will be abolished by opening up a new bus station, a shopping centre, and a car park while
the school is preserving its area steadily.Submitted by yusifakhmad on
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