The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
The line graph depicts the change in the
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in
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homes
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the homes
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of
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devices in the UK namely CD
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players
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,
cellphone
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cellphones
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, desktop
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PCs
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and the Internet from 1996 to 2003.
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cell phones
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had the most significant increase which began at just under 20%
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peaked at 70% despite some fluctuations during the the period. In 1998/99, the appearance of the Internet experienced
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exponential growth in the pattern of
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residential
access to
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application. To be specific, access to the Internet held a share of 10% at the beginning and after that, skyrocketed to approximately 50% by the end of the period.
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