The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The following illustration demonstrates the
proccess
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process
of
the
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milk
and dairy
products
production. In an
overall
context, the process consists of 7 main stages commencing with
grazing
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of cows and cumulating in the supply of the outputs to the customers. Examining the details, as the diagram the initial step is grazing of cows. After the grazing, as
a
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next
stage
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the cows provide the
milk
twice a day, and the
products
transfer to the dairy factory
in
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a daily basis. Before delivering the obtained item through the
the
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tanker to the dairy , the
milk
is maintained at the refrigeration storage. Shifting the focus to the final stages, the
milk
is converted to
the
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multiple
products
such
as cheese, cream and butter or pasteurized and packaged
for providing
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simple
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a simple
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milk
product.
Furthermore
,
at the end
of each
these
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steps, the
products
are delivered for
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consumption.
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