The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The following illustration demonstrates the
proccess
of Correct your spelling
process
the
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milk
and dairy Use synonyms
products
production.
In an Use synonyms
overall
context, the process consists of 7 main stages commencing with Linking Words
grazing
of cows and cumulating in the supply of the outputs to the customers.
Examining the details, as the diagram the initial step is grazing of cows. After the grazing, as Add an article
the grazing
a
next Correct article usage
the
stage
the cows provide the Add a comma
stage,
milk
twice a day, and the Use synonyms
products
transfer to the dairy factory Use synonyms
in
a daily basis. Before delivering the obtained item through the Change preposition
on
the
tanker to the dairy , the Remove the redundancy
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milk
is maintained at the refrigeration storage.
Shifting the focus to the final stages, the Use synonyms
milk
is converted to Use synonyms
the
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products
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such
as cheese, cream and butter or pasteurized and packagedLinking Words
for providing
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to provide
simple
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a simple
milk
product. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
at the end
of each Linking Words
these
steps, the Change preposition
of these
products
are delivered for Use synonyms
the
consumption.Correct article usage
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