You are going to teach English to your friend’s child. Write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. In your letter tell your teacher about the child; say when and where you will teach the child; explain what books you would like to borrow.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to you as I am interested in borrowing some English books
from you for tutoring a grade 7 child. Actually, one of my friend's son
who studies in D.A.V school, Brampton, needs to have a personal teacher because he was unable to attend classes in Fix the agreement mistake
sons
summers
for 5 months Fix the agreement mistake
summer
due to
hi
poor health conditions.
Well, everyone Correct your spelling
his
is having
a very hectic schedule nowadays, but Wrong verb form
has
still
I have some spare time during the evenings as I was a teacher for 4 years in India. So, I think I can help him. Add a comma
still,
Moreover
, library
could be a good and Add an article
the library
a library
a
peaceful place to teach him well. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, more books
are available at this
place if I needed
more help.
Wrong verb form
need
Therefore
, for a student of
grade 7, some Change preposition
in
grammer
Correct your spelling
grammar
books
and a dictionary along with
his text
Correct your spelling
textbooks
books
are going to be enough for me to providing
him a good tutoring. If you can lend me these materials, I would really Wrong verb form
provide
apppreciate
that.
waiting for your reply.
Yours Correct your spelling
appreciate
sicerely
,
NavCorrect your spelling
sincerely
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greeting and closing
Ensure that the letter has a clear opening and closing statement. The closing statement was informal; consider a more formal tone to align with the purpose of the letter.
logical structure
Organize ideas in a logical and cohesive manner. Each paragraph should focus on a single topic. Make use of linking words to better connect ideas.
single idea per paragraph
Use a single idea per paragraph and expand on it fully. Some paragraphs contained multiple ideas which could be more coherently expanded.
complete response
Fully address all bullet points from the task. The letter can be further improved by providing specific details in response to the task such as the exact books needed, and confirming times more precisely.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable and consistent tone throughout the letter. While formal in most parts, there are instances in the letter where the tone becomes too informal, such as 'waiting for your reply.' It should be more formal to reflect the letter's purpose.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,