The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the centre of a little
city
before and after development
.
Regarding the town before development
, there is road
on the northern Add an article
a road
the road
side
of the city
called the main road
and this
road
is surrounded by shopping malls at the top and the bottom. Moreover
, at the top of these shops is the country
Correct your spelling
countryside
side
.
On the other hand
, I can see that there is a way from the main road
to the southeast which is connected to a tiny park and there is another one which is connected to the school.
In regard to the city
after development
, on the northern side
of this
city
there is a Bus station, Shopping centre and car park. Add a comma
city,
In addition
, there is a wide range of shops at the centre of the city
which is separated from the top by the pedestrian cross. On the other side
of the coin, there is a large number of housing and small parks on the eastern side
of this
city
. All of these places which I mentioned are surrounded by road
. Fix the agreement mistake
roads
At the end
, there is a school on the southern side
which is outside side
the city
.
Overall
, even though city
after Correct article usage
the city
development
has a lot more facilities, there are some places which are common between these two maps.Submitted by parsahassani077 on
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