The Maps below Show The Centre of A Small Town Called Islip as It is Now, and Plans for Its Development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
There are two maps, both maps show the construction of building changes from Islip town centre now will illustrate the plans development of the building.
Overall
, there are several differences between the space and place of the room.
To begin
with, in the north of Islip town centre, there are two conveniences it
separated by the main road. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, the east part of the building has a park location, after that the opposite of it, there is a school which is in the south part, you can get there through the main road. But, before that, you will pass the house who has a big located in the area.
On the other hand
, about the plan of changing the building, there are a lot of changes from the map before. Such
as the Bus station, Shopping centre, and car park located on the north side. Opposite this
part which is the south side, there are housing, new housing, and a small park. Those parts are separated by the circumference of the road.Submitted by waauliya011 on
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